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Wednesday, 25 December 2019

SLJ - Wk2 - Day 3 The right to an education

Today I have to write a short story.  It can be about anything I wish.
I've chosen to write a story using my Next Generation dolls.  My sister gave me a Doctor doll for Christmas.

I found it was easier to think of a story to write about when I used my dolls to create the story first.  It was fun to play with them.

How do you came up with stories to write about?  What would your story be about if you had to write one?

...Some Bees can't fly...

This story begins with Miss Ginger.  Miss Ginger is with her teenager, called Royal Bee.  Royal Bee is 18 years old and likes gold and black things, she also likes to dance.  Watch out for her high heels, she uses them to sting people.

"Where's my other earring?"  asked Royal Bee.  "Go and look in your tree house" said Miss Ginger.
As Royal Bee was climbing up the ladder to her tree house, the ladder broke.  Royal Bee fell to the ground, hurting her arm badly.

Miss Ginger screamed, because her child fell out of a tree.  Thinking it may help, Royal Bee was given some sparkly silver glasses.  Royal Bee was so angry, as angry as a wild bear.  

Grabbing Royal Bee by the leg, Miss Ginger dragged her daughter to the doctors office, which was right next door.  They got a free passage to the doctors being so close.

The doctors name is Miss Helen.  Miss Ginger left Royal Bee with her and went home.
Miss Helen asked Royal Bee to lay down on the special bed in her doctors room.  "Lets go through the basic tests and then we'll see if you need an xray for your arm".
With all the testing over, Royal Bee did need an xray.

Going to the x-ray room, Royal Bees arm was x-rayed.  Her whole hand was broken really badly.  Dr Helen took other x-rays too showing a lot of broken parts in Royal Bees body.  When Royal Bee was bandaged up she was able to go home.

Royal Bee was so happy to have a Doctor like Doctor Helen.  Royal Bee was given her xrays to take home, she put them on her bedroom wall.      



1 comment:

  1. Hi Lucy,

    Mikey here.

    Congratulations on completing another activity. I can tell that you've put a lot of time and effort into this one - well done! :)

    I really like how you used your dolls to help you come up with a story. That's a very clever strategy. Do you like doing creative writing activities like this one? You have quite a good imagination. :)

    Have a lovely afternoon, Lucy. I hope to see more Summer Learning Journey posts from you soon. :)

    Bye for now,

    Mikey

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